*Fire's Poetry*

[ℱirepelt]

To start, here are my old poems I posted on the old HC:

Betrayal

You've made me suffer
Trying to make yourself look tougher

How could you do this to me?
When we first met you were so nice

You made me bleed like hel.l
Before wishing a good farewell

Can't believe I liked you
Before making me feel like the worst

Of everything you did to me
I'm not as weak as I use to be

Then you'll know
I won't lose like so long ago

A One Way Date

[glow=red,2,300]I slowly wonder into the day
Hoping there is no delay

I'm standing at the bus stop
waiting for the next round

I see you coming around
I tell myself not to frown

As you come up to me
You hand over those roses

As we begin to walk together
I'm being told more about you

A smile appears from the blue
As you take me to an isolated place

You don't hesitate to touch my face
You whisper something into my ear

A tear of delight wonders down my cheek
Then just when the kiss is about to come

Your ex comes making me feel numb
She tells you sorry and you can't date such a girl

She pushes me down, takes the roses, and tells me to leave
I watch as she walks away with you

I'm surging with nothing but fury
My eyes begin to get blurry

I saw, you weren't even resisting
How dare you go with her all happy

I stand up and follow
I catch up to her but with you no longer

She tells me to flee
Thinking that I will be deceived

As I refuse she takes out the blade of jealousy
Not caring for safety, I charge forward

The fight ends as I'm pinned down
Both of us have bruises all around

I try to break free but can no longer
As appears she is stronger

The knife's blade is pointed to my throat
She's gonna make sure I get the message

Soon after she is pulled away from me
I sit up shocked and confused

Seeing as you came out of the blue
She screams at you but is silenced by your deadly glare

Taking the knife and throwing it away
You hit her with her own enrage

She glares back at you then leaves
A hand is cast down to me

Looking up to see that gentle smile
He tells me sorry and this date will be worthwhile[/glow]

The Never Received

I wanted to give a good reply
But never got the chance to imply

Back then
We were best friends

Always talking 'till the end
All the fun we'd lend

Just remember the first time we'd agree
To be friends forever

But it went to the lowest degree
Seeing as it blew away from me

And torn apart by the chaotic wind
At first we were free

Now we can no longer hang out everyday
Can no longer talk everyday

All in a huge dismay
I never got the chance

To say in my advance
Goodbye

Those Broken Memories

I remember the day we first met
It was as clear as the night sky

You made me laugh as you told those jokes
Your voice had such a gentle stroke

Everytime I'd cry
You'd be there to give me a good time

I thought you would always be by my side
Now you've completely changed

You decided to keep me out of range
Your mere words have caused my heart to bleed

You wanted to blow me away
Like a feather drifting along the silent breeze

Our friends hold little for you once you stopped caring
I hold those gentle feelings for you

When you found out you made it all untrue
Wish we could go back

Where we had fun and the least bit of hate
When I see you

Sometimes, you act like nothing bad went on
I know I'm not brave enough to say anything

I still manage to hold these feelings
You don't realize how much I want to despise you

Yet I'm being held back with only the slightest clue
Those broken memories

I've glued them back and held on
But when I do

I obviously feel worse when I remember you

Bitter

Do you remember?
When I last saw you?

You held something bitter in your eyes
Telling me to go die

Maybe we shouldn't have met
After all you're just a pest

Why did I even bother to get to know you?
You act like the predator coming for its prey

But I'll act before you
And make you taste your own betray

How much further can this go on?
'Till I know you're gone

Why I even try
To stay by your side

Is a reason unknown

Forgotten

Strange how we could forget that day
When we would run and play

I ran with you to the end
I had hoped this friendship would last

Then sometime ago
I tell you I have to go

Before we separated I asked
When I come back will we still be friends?

You say yes and wave goodbye
I smile with a good sigh

I watch as the year flys
Next years autumn enters which is when

We will for sure meet again
I come back nervous and scared

Waiting to see you anywhere
I stand at your doorstep

When you answer I ask
Dear friend do you remember?

When we always hung out together?
You answer with one simple word

I stand shocked and upset
The door closes and I don't see you

ever again




Please leave a comment, constructive critism, or both if you like. Please DON'T flame ^_^

[ℱirepelt]

Unseen

There is one who has been regretting
I can hardly keep myself from pretending

Somehow, everything everywhere has turned out wrong
I search for those unseen

I see you however, you cannot
For I am surrounded by that cold black mist

You decided That I shall be taken off that list
You have moved on

And for you to ask makes me feel mistaken
Yet I know I am not wrong

Look and give me an answer
An answer that is good and pure

Help me find a way to get that cure
Before I am forgotten

[ℱirepelt]

Time

It flies eternally

Never does it tire

The better the day, the faster it goes

For bitter days, it slows

It wipes away the past

Bringing the more distant future

It carries with it the sun and the moon

The sky follows in a rhythmic tune

It goes on as does life

Plea

You look for a way to solve the mystery

Where is the key?

You look for a way to solve the problem

Where is the glee?

You look for a way out

Where are we?

You look for yourself

Where is the real me?

You look for the answers

Have you yet to plea?


Those were alittle short and the last one probably didn't make much sense. ;D

[Springy]

ooooo i like them all!!!!

[ℱirepelt]

Thank you Springy!

Flow

In an endless flowing river,

there are those rocks that tend to block the path

However, you can find a way past those rocks

Once you do you may have learned something

In that endless rushing water

That could be crushing pebbles

And squeezing through the smallest cracks of those larger rocks

Their will always be those rocks in the way

That corrupt the waters path

[ℱirepelt]

Change of the Wind

Spring:

Flowers bloom in the warm grass
Cold showers run through the hours
The sun has already melted most of the snow
Leaves are beginning to sprout from their trees once more

Summer:

Frozen snow now forgotten
Beauty of landscapes enlighten
Heat hits in various waves
Water has more meaning

Autumn:

The changing colors
Leaves rest on the grounds
Pleasant breezes whistle pleasant sounds
Grass glistens from the frost
It heralds the coming of winter

Winter:

Snow dances with the wind
The frozen tundra is left slippery from the ice
It sparkles from the sun’s rays
The pleasant displays
Of this forever cycling scenery

Opposites

[shadow=yellow,left,300]It creates brightness throughout the sky
Like a giant light bulb

It burns the planets with its heat
Shadows are casted though not always

Auras are seen up north
Where there’s a lack of warmth

It falls while [/shadow][shadow=white,left,300]the other object rises
Making a black sky

Stars glitter, but not as brightly as it
The lands below are illuminated

It pushes and pulls the waters tides
Constantly it is in a phase

In some years it blocks the light of the burning object miles away
More frequently it is blocked by Earth[/shadow]

[_winter]

wow, awesome poems, Fire !

i love the contrasts of everything to the sun

[b3n5000]

Liked all of them best one's were

The First one is my favorite
1. 5/5
2. 5/5
3. 5/4

3rd one sounded like a rap an not a poem but their al good aside from that !!!

[ℱirepelt]

Thankyou guys Rap? Okay... They're supposed to sound calm and deep but okay. XD

[Springy]

Lol I like them all fire! keep it up!!

[ℱirepelt]

These are for a contest I'm entering for school

Insomnia

Lights illuminate down the halls

Seeping through the cracks of the bedroom door

Intense hot or cold air fills the room

Drip, drip

Emitting from the kitchen, the faucet sobs at being forgotten

The floors squeak like mice as they are stepped on

Tick, tock

The continued voices echo until dawn

The night’s silence is too loud

Apologue

Like a lizard

Extremely sharp nails

And skin like scales

Soothing warmth

Penetrating cold

With brilliant speed

I’ll pay no heed

Love for dry

Hate for water

For some, quite the other

Fear no bugs

Concern for thugs

Akin and distinct

The reptilians ways

[Springy]

I love them!!!! you will definantly win the contest!!

[Dont forget !!HAWKEH!!]

The last two could be better sorry im trying to be honest.
Times the best for me

[ℱirepelt]

Ah no. Honesty is what I need in order to improve. If anyone has a suggestion of how I could improve, throw it out there. Constructive critism is welcome. But, please, I do not appreciate flaming. That is, in my opinion, pointless because it's like you expect someone to get something perfect right away. No, it takes time. Patience. Noone's perfect nor will anyone ever be. That's my opinion anyway ;D Not only that, I beleive it's against the rules. Oh, and I didn't win. I figured I wouldn't, but I am glad to have entered at all. So, yeah, here are my next few. Not much rhyming used to none at all. I just wanted to experiment alittle. ^_^

Friendships

My dear friend

Do not be hard and do not be simple

Control is unnecessary

Opinions are optional

Betrayal is brutal

Never be blind to the acts of trickery

Some forgive as others do not

Know them well before inviting

My dear friend

It can be brittle and frail

Easily lost through the sands of time

Possibly never reaching its prime

It can be rewarding, likewise

Making for fun and play

Hopefully it’ll never flow away

Watch their backs and they’ll watch yours

My dear friend

Do you not agree?

Push that aside and don’t let it bother

Discord can be welcomed as long as it’s not taken harshly

Honesty is always best

Trust, do not misuse

Give advice when you can

It is fine when you cannot

My dear friend

If they feel down, do try calming

They say no, let them be

It may be better to just give them time

Do not be bothered if they cannot offer advice

Some can be very good at it as others are not

Do not expect too much

Nor too little

My dear friend

Bonds are invisible tiers

Easily made and easily kept

Or misguided and inept

Do not be fooled

It may or may not last

Many ways, it can come

Well, how long would you be able to endure it?

My dear friend

Dreams

Illusions of the mind

Once in awhile repeated

Without the knowledge of why

Vividness may be enshrined

Eyes open and they are forgotten

Of course, never always

Few may be stuck in a twisted horror scene

Dreams can gently take one’s mind away

Occasionally, they are used to escape reality

It conceals its beauty

And its darkness

Only certain times can they be revealed

Awaiting

[glow=red,2,300]Standing in the palms of dusk

The final light fading into the horizon

The dancing stars will brighten the sky

Zephyr breezes relieve the sick grass

Soon to come

Bright lights slicing through the sky

Their burning bodies shrink them away

With speeds fast like a rocket

Denting the ground many ways below when landing

Or too small to even affect

So mystical and dangerous

The sky, soon to rain fire[/glow]

Cosmos

Large and vast

Below freezing or burning high

Rocks moving astray

Colorful dust mixing with gas

New celestial bodies created

Firey orbs trapped in darkness

Far apart or colliding into one

Some sucked away into nothingness

Occurrences quick to those close

Not yet noticed by those far

Constantly expanding

How much further is unknown

Vanished

She journeyed far in search of what had been lost

She looked in the shadows of the forest

She fought through the breath taking desert

She searched in the deepest coldest parts of the cave

Everywhere she looked

For the longest of years

She wondered if she’d even find it

What was it again?

It was not living

Nor was it dead

It was no object in fact

She began wondering what she was even looking for in the first place

Wish

It takes a lot for such a thing, young one

You want this or that to happen?

Do not be mistaken, young one

It does not come easy

I can help, young one

But do not think I will do it all

I can only give advice on how you can achieve it

I can grant a small amount of help

It is you who must do the rest

Do your part

I will do mine

That is what you misunderstand, young one

Secret

Forever bound to secrecy

How long can you hold it?

Not letting it out no matter what

How long can you stand it?

You’ve only been told to keep quiet

Is it really worth it?

Pyro

Smoke suffocates whoever’s in its way

Heat burns tenderness

Hot molted rock melts a pathway

Fire destroys

Sometimes, it creates something new

It lives to do what it pleases

Hydro

Misty steam mixes with the air

Cool or hot to the skin

Taking on different shapes wherever it is

Existing in three states

Water gives life or takes it

Its decisions are not its own

This one's a haiku.

Tomodachi

I will remember
All the fun shared together
I miss you dearly

[ℱirepelt]

An Owl's Night

The sunset passes
Making way for a clear night
Sounds of prey quiet and predators of the dark rise
Owls leap into the air
Feathers flowing against the wind

Echoes in the empty world
Will hear an owl's cry
Just that same path that it always takes
Repeating an everyday routine

Innocent blood filling the abyss
Surviving on whatever possible thing that thrives

That continuing task
In which is never masked
Will go on until the end

Forever does the bird of prey
Continue to cry into the next generation