Post by ℱirepelt on Jun 23, 2009 16:47:54 GMT -5
To start, here are my old poems I posted on the old HC:
You've made me suffer
Trying to make yourself look tougher
How could you do this to me?
When we first met you were so nice
You made me bleed like hel.l
Before wishing a good farewell
Can't believe I liked you
Before making me feel like the worst
Of everything you did to me
I'm not as weak as I use to be
Then you'll know
I won't lose like so long ago
[glow=red,2,300]I slowly wonder into the day
Hoping there is no delay
I'm standing at the bus stop
waiting for the next round
I see you coming around
I tell myself not to frown
As you come up to me
You hand over those roses
As we begin to walk together
I'm being told more about you
A smile appears from the blue
As you take me to an isolated place
You don't hesitate to touch my face
You whisper something into my ear
A tear of delight wonders down my cheek
Then just when the kiss is about to come
Your ex comes making me feel numb
She tells you sorry and you can't date such a girl
She pushes me down, takes the roses, and tells me to leave
I watch as she walks away with you
I'm surging with nothing but fury
My eyes begin to get blurry
I saw, you weren't even resisting
How dare you go with her all happy
I stand up and follow
I catch up to her but with you no longer
She tells me to flee
Thinking that I will be deceived
As I refuse she takes out the blade of jealousy
Not caring for safety, I charge forward
The fight ends as I'm pinned down
Both of us have bruises all around
I try to break free but can no longer
As appears she is stronger
The knife's blade is pointed to my throat
She's gonna make sure I get the message
Soon after she is pulled away from me
I sit up shocked and confused
Seeing as you came out of the blue
She screams at you but is silenced by your deadly glare
Taking the knife and throwing it away
You hit her with her own enrage
She glares back at you then leaves
A hand is cast down to me
Looking up to see that gentle smile
He tells me sorry and this date will be worthwhile[/glow]
I wanted to give a good reply
But never got the chance to imply
Back then
We were best friends
Always talking 'till the end
All the fun we'd lend
Just remember the first time we'd agree
To be friends forever
But it went to the lowest degree
Seeing as it blew away from me
And torn apart by the chaotic wind
At first we were free
Now we can no longer hang out everyday
Can no longer talk everyday
All in a huge dismay
I never got the chance
To say in my advance
Goodbye
I remember the day we first met
It was as clear as the night sky
You made me laugh as you told those jokes
Your voice had such a gentle stroke
Everytime I'd cry
You'd be there to give me a good time
I thought you would always be by my side
Now you've completely changed
You decided to keep me out of range
Your mere words have caused my heart to bleed
You wanted to blow me away
Like a feather drifting along the silent breeze
Our friends hold little for you once you stopped caring
I hold those gentle feelings for you
When you found out you made it all untrue
Wish we could go back
Where we had fun and the least bit of hate
When I see you
Sometimes, you act like nothing bad went on
I know I'm not brave enough to say anything
I still manage to hold these feelings
You don't realize how much I want to despise you
Yet I'm being held back with only the slightest clue
Those broken memories
I've glued them back and held on
But when I do
I obviously feel worse when I remember you
Do you remember?
When I last saw you?
You held something bitter in your eyes
Telling me to go die
Maybe we shouldn't have met
After all you're just a pest
Why did I even bother to get to know you?
You act like the predator coming for its prey
But I'll act before you
And make you taste your own betray
How much further can this go on?
'Till I know you're gone
Why I even try
To stay by your side
Is a reason unknown
Strange how we could forget that day
When we would run and play
I ran with you to the end
I had hoped this friendship would last
Then sometime ago
I tell you I have to go
Before we separated I asked
When I come back will we still be friends?
You say yes and wave goodbye
I smile with a good sigh
I watch as the year flys
Next years autumn enters which is when
We will for sure meet again
I come back nervous and scared
Waiting to see you anywhere
I stand at your doorstep
When you answer I ask
Dear friend do you remember?
When we always hung out together?
You answer with one simple word
I stand shocked and upset
The door closes and I don't see you
ever again
Please leave a comment, constructive critism, or both if you like. Please DON'T flame ^_^
Betrayal
You've made me suffer
Trying to make yourself look tougher
How could you do this to me?
When we first met you were so nice
You made me bleed like hel.l
Before wishing a good farewell
Can't believe I liked you
Before making me feel like the worst
Of everything you did to me
I'm not as weak as I use to be
Then you'll know
I won't lose like so long ago
A One Way Date
[glow=red,2,300]I slowly wonder into the day
Hoping there is no delay
I'm standing at the bus stop
waiting for the next round
I see you coming around
I tell myself not to frown
As you come up to me
You hand over those roses
As we begin to walk together
I'm being told more about you
A smile appears from the blue
As you take me to an isolated place
You don't hesitate to touch my face
You whisper something into my ear
A tear of delight wonders down my cheek
Then just when the kiss is about to come
Your ex comes making me feel numb
She tells you sorry and you can't date such a girl
She pushes me down, takes the roses, and tells me to leave
I watch as she walks away with you
I'm surging with nothing but fury
My eyes begin to get blurry
I saw, you weren't even resisting
How dare you go with her all happy
I stand up and follow
I catch up to her but with you no longer
She tells me to flee
Thinking that I will be deceived
As I refuse she takes out the blade of jealousy
Not caring for safety, I charge forward
The fight ends as I'm pinned down
Both of us have bruises all around
I try to break free but can no longer
As appears she is stronger
The knife's blade is pointed to my throat
She's gonna make sure I get the message
Soon after she is pulled away from me
I sit up shocked and confused
Seeing as you came out of the blue
She screams at you but is silenced by your deadly glare
Taking the knife and throwing it away
You hit her with her own enrage
She glares back at you then leaves
A hand is cast down to me
Looking up to see that gentle smile
He tells me sorry and this date will be worthwhile[/glow]
The Never Received
I wanted to give a good reply
But never got the chance to imply
Back then
We were best friends
Always talking 'till the end
All the fun we'd lend
Just remember the first time we'd agree
To be friends forever
But it went to the lowest degree
Seeing as it blew away from me
And torn apart by the chaotic wind
At first we were free
Now we can no longer hang out everyday
Can no longer talk everyday
All in a huge dismay
I never got the chance
To say in my advance
Goodbye
Those Broken Memories
I remember the day we first met
It was as clear as the night sky
You made me laugh as you told those jokes
Your voice had such a gentle stroke
Everytime I'd cry
You'd be there to give me a good time
I thought you would always be by my side
Now you've completely changed
You decided to keep me out of range
Your mere words have caused my heart to bleed
You wanted to blow me away
Like a feather drifting along the silent breeze
Our friends hold little for you once you stopped caring
I hold those gentle feelings for you
When you found out you made it all untrue
Wish we could go back
Where we had fun and the least bit of hate
When I see you
Sometimes, you act like nothing bad went on
I know I'm not brave enough to say anything
I still manage to hold these feelings
You don't realize how much I want to despise you
Yet I'm being held back with only the slightest clue
Those broken memories
I've glued them back and held on
But when I do
I obviously feel worse when I remember you
Bitter
Do you remember?
When I last saw you?
You held something bitter in your eyes
Telling me to go die
Maybe we shouldn't have met
After all you're just a pest
Why did I even bother to get to know you?
You act like the predator coming for its prey
But I'll act before you
And make you taste your own betray
How much further can this go on?
'Till I know you're gone
Why I even try
To stay by your side
Is a reason unknown
Forgotten
Strange how we could forget that day
When we would run and play
I ran with you to the end
I had hoped this friendship would last
Then sometime ago
I tell you I have to go
Before we separated I asked
When I come back will we still be friends?
You say yes and wave goodbye
I smile with a good sigh
I watch as the year flys
Next years autumn enters which is when
We will for sure meet again
I come back nervous and scared
Waiting to see you anywhere
I stand at your doorstep
When you answer I ask
Dear friend do you remember?
When we always hung out together?
You answer with one simple word
I stand shocked and upset
The door closes and I don't see you
ever again
Please leave a comment, constructive critism, or both if you like. Please DON'T flame ^_^